Talk:Palomita Blanca (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:31, 7 August 2022 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

This will be reviewed by me over these two days --K. Peake 08:31, 7 August 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Should you really use & instead of and in the infobox?
• Swap the release sentence with the writing/production one
• "It is a bachata acoustic ballad track about" → "It is a bachata acoustic ballad about" per WP:SEAOFBLUE
• "was met with positive reactions from" → "received positive reactions from" making this the first sentence of the second para instead
• Remove "for the track" after accompanying music video
• Move the award sentence to being the second sentence of the second para in the new order, followed by the commercial one and then music video
• Pipe Latin Award to BMI Film & TV Awards

Background and composition

• "Juan Luis Guerra released his seventh studio album," → "Guerra released his seventh studio album"
• "his answer", Guerra states." → "his answer", Guerra stated." unless this is a book quote, then keep as it is
• "new album in Miami. "I'm making" → "new album in Miami and he said: "I'm making"
• "On February the following year, the singer gave" → "In February the following year, Guerra gave"
• "and that would be released" → "revealing it would be released"
• "Guerra's label, Karen Records, revealed" → "Guerra's label Karen Records, revealed"
• "the album's productions" is the plural really suitable here?
• "that it would still contain the aforementioned musical genres." → "it would still contain the genres he announced." or something similar, per this being a new para
• Remove the word song after ballad because that is another way of saying song/track for a musical description

Promotion and reception

• Remove accompanying before music video since the term for implies this
• "called it a" → "called the song a" starting a new para at this point
• "referred it as one of" → "referred to it as one of the"
• "as one of the record's" I don't think this is the appropriate introduction for a quote focusing on a "piece"
• "hits of the midnineties."" → "hits of the midnineties"." per MOS:QUOTE
• "It was acknowledged as an" → ""Palomita Blanca" was acknowledged as an"
• Pipe BMI Latin Awards to BMI Film & TV Awards
• Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
• "it became his" → "it became Guerra's"
• Remove semi-colon at the end of the sentence

Charts

Weekly charts

• Wikilink Hot Latin Songs
• Wikilink Tropical Airplay

Year-end charts

• Good

See also

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks incredible at 5.7%!!!
• Wikilink Broadcast Music, Inc. on ref 18
• Remove or replace ref 20 since AllMusic chart positions can be edited anyone so this is unreliable

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; nice work here once again! --K. Peake 07:09, 8 August 2022 (UTC)

  Thanks for the review as always. In regards to Allmusic's charts, the charts were provided by Billboard themselves as a license before the cost was too much for AllMusic (Source). For whatever reason, Billboard doesn't have a database for JLG despite him being one of the biggest Latin music stars. BTW, I don't know if you this, but I clipped articles from Newspapers.com and articles from ProQuest are free to us Wikipedia users (just go [https://wikipedialibrary.wmflabs.org/ here) to access them. Hope this helps! Erick (talk) 14:11, 8 August 2022 (UTC)

  ✓ Pass now, I did some brief copy editing but nice work on this! --K. Peake 20:33, 8 August 2022 (UTC)