Talk:Park Resorts
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Can anyone confirm whether PR is managed by Bourne Leisure? I always thought they did, as this page on their website says "their management has 30 years of experince", which suggests Bourne, and their headquarters are Hertfordshire, which is in exactly the same place as Haven & British Holidays. Plus, when on a break to Ty Mawr last month, "Sparky's Krew Club" were reading a letter, and it ended with "Mr Bourne- managing director of Park Resorts". I'm not saying that what's on the page is untrue; it just seems to be in-your-face. Marbles333 16:46, 16 October 2006 (UTC)
There are two many superlatives in this article for it to be considered a true wiki. See haven holidays page for a decent stab for a wiki from the same industry.
Also references to 'we' indicate it's been created by a member of staff at Park resorts.
As for the point made about PR being owned by Bourne Leisure, it's not. It was purchased by several former senior managers at BL, hence the claim about 30 years experience I presume!
Their offices are close to but not part of Haven & British Holidays (owned by Bourne Leisure) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.70.113.169 (talk) 16:32, 4 December 2007 (UTC)
- That comment is over a year old, that problem was sorted ages ago! Regardless, thanks for your response. Even if "you" are an employee of Park Resorts, I'm sorry however you must still verify all the claims and please do not write articles as advertisements. All articles in Wikipedia must represent a neutral point of view and written in third person, therefore you could not write the article as first person plural we/us. The Haven and British Holidays article has been clearly referenced, uses a neutral point of view and written in third person. P.S. just adding a template does not add this article for deletion; it must go through the article deletion process. The article without many of the frills and fancy was perfectly fine before it was turned into an advertisement; Wikipedia is an informative site representing the neutral views of the general population. /Marbles 19:41, 4 December 2007 (UTC)