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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 06:23, 23 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • and ultimately is a commentary → and is ultimately a commentary
  • Underwood typewriter and after numerous → a semicolon would help this flow better → Underwood typewriter; after numerous
  • permutations the composers → comma before "the composers"
  • boyfriend Taylor Kinney, was refuted by the singer → overfluous comma here
  • The song's release was preceded → state "the recording's" here for alternation
  • reviews for "Perfect Illusion" with many of them → comma before "with many"
  • stating "Gaga fuses her neo-folkie Lilith-hippie mode with her disco roots in this Mark Ronson-produced dance-floor confession". → this is overly detailed for the lead and can be thus removed
  • reached number 15 on the US Billboard Hot 100 as well as entered → comma before "as well"
  • subordinate charts also → remove "also" here
  • top-ten → top 10
  • Slovak Republic → state simply Slovakia here
  • as well as a number of television → as well as made a number of television

Infobox

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  • flawless ;)

Background and development

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  • and recording processes → and recording process
  • Buro247.com → omit the ".com" part

Writing and recording

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  • The song began as a demo called → The song fruited from a demo called
  • the US → write out please
  • The song's arrangement → State "The track's" here to alternate
  • was done by Ronson who played → was handled by Ronson, who played
  • and Parker added drums → alongside Parker adding drums
  • "She loves just sitting at a piano and barking orders at a drummer and she has an incredible voice," he confessed, and then went on to clarify → Concerning this, he confessed that "she...", further clarifiying
  • and then go → and then go on
  • recalled: "She's never → : to ,
  • Lyrics were developed → They were developed
  • adding: "We stripped everything away → : to ,
  • Shangri-La Studios which BloodPop → comma before "which"

Music and lyrical interpretation

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  • building chord sequence, which he felt leads → building chord sequence that he felt leads (due to word repetition)
  • autotune → Auto-Tune
  • Lewis Corner from Digital Spy gave a breakdown of the song → what is this supposed to mean?
  • Add release year in brackets to "Just Dance" and "Poker Face"
  • Same for Born This Way
  • with the verse and the refrain being connected → due to the verse and the refrain being connected
  • and Gaga's vocals span → with Gaga's vocals spanning
  • Lyrically, "Perfect Illusion" is about the → Lyrically, "Perfect Illusion" delves on the (for better reading)
  • hence the song name → hence the song's name
  • an interview to iHeartMedia → an interview with iHeartMedia
  • as "about modern ecstasy... → as being "about modern ecstasy [...]
  • that the lyrics ultimately was a → that the lyrics ultimately were a
  • was about their relationship. She felt that the lyrics spoke → was about their relationship, further believing that they spoke
  • The singer added: "I love Taylor → : to ,
  • against [him]... [I]t's a → ... to [...]

Release and artwork

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  • Gaga confirmed the release date → Following this, the singer confirmed the release date
  • Another photo was revealed → use "unveiled" here for alternation
  • still picture → shot
  • called the artwork as "iconic" → called the cover "iconic"
  • comparing Gaga to that of Canadian singer-songwriter Alice Glass → remove "that of"
  • for the Bustle quote, please fix ... to [...]
  • 16 second → 16-second
  • and the same chord beats → with the same chord beats
  • along side host → alongside host
  • in the world... It feels like → ... to [...]

Critical reception

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  • four out of five stars, saying that the song "delights me → use "track" here for alternation
  • compared the verses to those by singer → compared the verses to work by singer
  • Unlink "Artpop" here
  • called the song "stomping" and said that Gaga was "blubbering → alternate here with "the singer"
  • In ranking Lady Gaga's lead singles → use "the singer's" here for alternation
  • Release year of "Applause" in brackets
  • ranked it number twenty-eight → ranked it number 28
  • stating "Gaga fuses → comma after "stating"

Chart performance

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  • million first-week US streams → million first-week streams in the United States
  • iHeartMedia owned → iHeartMedia-owned
  • released dated September 24, 2016 → released for the week ending September 24, 2016
  • becoming her second lowest peaking → becoming her second-lowest peaking
  • Other debuts atop the charts happened in Finland → change "happened" to "occurred"
  • attained top-ten → attained top 10
  • top-five → top five
  • Link "Italian Singles Chart"

Music video

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  • According to Page Six, the music video was filmed → Use "the visual" here for alternation
  • recording studio with Gaga and Ronson, during conception of many → no comma + state "the singer" here for alternation
  • is an "energetic" track they → comma before "they"
  • That also gave them the idea to use Ronson, Parker → It also inspired them to use Ronson, Parker (alternation)
  • all playing cameos in the clip → for cameo appearances in the clip
  • It starts with Gaga singing → It starts with her singing (alternation)
  • which made up majority → add "the" before "majority"

Reception and analysis

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  • dance nature of the clip and noted that Gaga had posted → alternate with "the singer" here
  • Carey O'Donnell from Papermag felt that the video → alternate with "the visual" here please
  • She added that its a "different direction → "its" to "it's"
  • one a clear idea regarding what to expect from the video → alternate with "clip" here
  • realness to it... The → ... to [...]
  • like her previous albums, however he → , to ;
  • I've edited the image's description here by myself

Live performances and media usages

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  • and silver shorts and only with a microphone, → and sliver shorts, alongside a microphone

Charts

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  • flawless ;)
  • Are there any year-end charts?

Certifications

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  • flawless ;)

Release history

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  • Unlink formats and labels

Other stuff

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Copy-violation

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  • 59.9% is WAY too much! Please look for the first 5 sources at the top of the list and reduce the content from them in the article's body

Images and others

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  • Images perfectly illustrate the article
  • By the way, cool idea with the eye-rolling clip
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References

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  • As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article.
  • 1 dead link from iTunes! Please fix!

Outcome

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The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.