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GA Review

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Reviewer: Cwmhiraeth (talk · contribs) 09:21, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I propose to review this article and will be studying it in detail shortly. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:21, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

A few prose points

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  • "This species is gray above and white below, which extends onto the flanks as an obvious pale stripe." - This sentence needs clarification.
Rephrased to "This species is gray above and white below, with an obvious pale stripe on the flanks." -- Yzx (talk) 14:53, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Innocuous towards humans, the Pondicherry shark was caught and used for meat." - I don't much care for the use of the word "innocuous" here.
Changed to "harmless to humans". -- Yzx (talk) 14:53, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA Criteria

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  • 1a The article is well written
  • 1b The article conforms with the MOS guidelines as to layout, lead etc.
  • 2a&b The article is well referenced and has inline citations for all contentious statements.
  • 2c There is no original research as far as I can see.
  • 3a&b The coverage is broad enough and the article does not include irrelevant material.
  • 4 The article is neutral
  • 5 The article has been expanded by the nominator in the last week and has hardly been edited by anybody else recently.
  • 6 The images are either in the public domain or are appropriately licensed.
  • 7 The images are relevant to the topic and have suitable captions.
  • Overall assessment - Pass. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:08, 19 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]