Talk:Rhythm game/GA1
GA Review
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Well-written
There are a few issues which show be addressed.- Release years are indicated with a mix of parenthesis and regular prose. Keeping things consistent will improve the flow.
- The citations for the Fundamentals of Game Design book is different from the Arcade Mania! citations. I would pick one way or the other.
Ref 27- "Best Rhythm Game: Rock Band 2, UGO" needs a date (2008) and an accessdate.
- Prose is well-written and complies with MoS.
- Factually accurate and verifiable
- The sources look good; all from reliable publications and website.
The article looks good except for the start of the history section. It described early forms of rhythm games and then goes on to say "PaRappa the Rapper has also been credited as the first rhythm game". Were Simon and Dance Aerobics also credited as the first rhythm game or just forerunners?- Thanks for the clarification.
- Broad in its coverage
- The major aspects look to be covered without going into excess detail.
- Neutral
- Looks to be neutral and unbiased.
- Stable
- There do not seem be any edit wars and daily editing is minimal.
- Images
- All images look to improve the understanding of the discussed topics, and are free photos on commons.
- Overall
On hold for now- Meets criteria
The article looks great, just a few issues to take care of and I'll pass it for GA. Keep up the good work. (Guyinblack25 talk 15:52, 29 April 2009 (UTC))
- The recent edits addressed my concerns. Nice job on the excellent article. (Guyinblack25 talk 19:42, 29 April 2009 (UTC))
- Thanks for the review, and thanks to Bridies for doing most of the hard work. Randomran (talk) 20:14, 29 April 2009 (UTC)