Talk:Ricardio the Heart Guy/GA1
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 23:58, 2 December 2013 (UTC)
I shall review this, hopefully within the next few days. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 23:58, 2 December 2013 (UTC)
Sorry for the delay with this. Please see my comments below (all very minor).
- Comments
- What does "a literal heart" mean? I think I got an idea of it from the plot section, but it could be reworded slightly in the lead for clarity.
- I'd provide a wikilink to Storyboard
- I don't see anything about storyboarding in the production section, but perhaps I'm missing something? I admittedly don't know a whole lot about animation.
- Perhaps mention that the DVD featured audio commentary on the episode? [1]
- Speaking of that, is there anything else you can pull from the commentary? A few sentences doesn't seem like much.
As I said, not too many issues here. Will place the review on hold for now while my comments get resolved. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 03:38, 23 December 2013 (UTC)