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Reviewer: JonCatalán(Talk) 21:56, 7 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Changes

The following are changes I made, apart from any light ce I might have done, to the text.

Comments

Here are some comments on the text.

  • "The Russians did not believe that superfiring turrets offered any advantage, discounting the value of axial fire..." → The language is a bit technical. Maybe you can make a quick note explaining what axial fire is — in a set of em dashes.
  • "She completed with only a single 3-inch (76 mm) 30-caliber Lender anti-aircraft (AA) gun mounted on the quarterdeck." → "She completed with..." sounds a bit awkward, I think.
  • "Conway's says that four 75-millimeter (3.0 in) were added to the roofs of the end turrets during the war." → Four 75-millimeter what?
Other
  • Prose is clear and concise.
  • Article is stable.
  • File:Gangutlayboard1909.jpg → The tag is fine, but you might want to replace the older tag with the new pd-old template.

Looks good. The above are just suggestions. JonCatalán(Talk) 22:39, 7 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]