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Good articleSMS Alexandrine has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starSMS Alexandrine is part of the Screw corvettes of Germany series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
November 17, 2017Good article nomineeListed
October 12, 2019Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:SMS Alexandrine/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 14:44, 17 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:44, 17 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

In light of full complaince, I will instant pass and make some prose suggestions. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:21, 17 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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  • No DAB links ☒N, "Central Pacific" is DAB link.
  • No Dead links checkY
  • Images appropriately licensed checkY

Prose Suggestions

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  • "Intended for service in the German colonial empire, the ship was designed with a combination of steam and sail power for extended range, and was equipped with a battery of ten 15-centimeter (5.9 in) guns." Would "Intended to serve with" work better as an into?
  • That's my only suggestion; good job! -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:28, 17 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]