1a. the prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct.
"mutinies"? I thought there was just one. "climactic", is that the right word for this? Consider creating/removing red links
The mutinies started in Wilhelmshaven and spread to a number of other places over a long period of time, for a variety of reasons and differing groups (i.e., war weary sailors, Socialists, Communists, etc.), so plural is better.
The paragraphs look good. I said consider the redlinks. On the topic of climactic, I was thinking all-out, or just final. Buggie111 (talk) 21:09, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
I don't plan on creating any of the cruiser units at this point in time, I'll get to SMS Condoreventually, and the rest aren't really my specialty. Climactic and final have similar meanings in this context, and I don't think "all-out" sounds all that encyclopedic. Parsecboy (talk) 12:52, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
It didn't occur to me until you said that, but she was the cruiser that went to South America with Kaiser and Konig Albert, which is well documented in their articles. Added a couple paragraphs on that.