Talk:SMS Strassburg/GA1

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Jump to navigation Jump to search

GA Review[edit]

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Buggie111 (talk · contribs) 13:53, 1 January 2012 (UTC)

Rate Attribute Review Comment
1. Well written:
1a. the prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct. "mutinies"? I thought there was just one. "climactic", is that the right word for this? Consider creating/removing red links
The mutinies started in Wilhelmshaven and spread to a number of other places over a long period of time, for a variety of reasons and differing groups (i.e., war weary sailors, Socialists, Communists, etc.), so plural is better.
Do you have a better word instead of climactic?
Red links are ok.
The paragraphs look good. I said consider the redlinks. On the topic of climactic, I was thinking all-out, or just final. Buggie111 (talk) 21:09, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
I don't plan on creating any of the cruiser units at this point in time, I'll get to SMS Condor eventually, and the rest aren't really my specialty. Climactic and final have similar meanings in this context, and I don't think "all-out" sounds all that encyclopedic. Parsecboy (talk) 12:52, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
1b. it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
2. Verifiable with no original research:
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
2b. all in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines.
2c. it contains no original research.
3. Broad in its coverage:
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. Anything available on 1913-1914 service?
It didn't occur to me until you said that, but she was the cruiser that went to South America with Kaiser and Konig Albert, which is well documented in their articles. Added a couple paragraphs on that.
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content.
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
7. Overall assessment. Some work to be done. Not much, though. Buggie111 (talk) 14:00, 1 January 2012 (UTC)