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GA Review

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  • Well written: Pass
    • One minor issue though:
      • "UB-16 and sister boat UB-17 comprised an order of two submarines ordered - a little redundant
        • How about: "The German Imperial Navy ordered UB-16 and sister boat UB-17 which comprised an order of two submarines ordered…" to make it really redundant? Or I could just change the ordered to placed. :) — Bellhalla (talk) 14:06, 18 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Factually Accurate: Pass
  • Broad in its coverage: Looks good, pass
  • Neutral: I see no issues, pass
  • Stable: Pass

Very nice work, Belhalla. Parsecboy (talk) 21:43, 17 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking the time to review the article. — Bellhalla (talk) 14:06, 18 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]