Talk:SM UB-16/GA1

GA Review

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• Well written: Pass

• • One minor issue though:
    • "UB-16 and sister boat UB-17 comprised an order of two submarines ordered - a little redundant
      • How about: "The German Imperial Navy ordered UB-16 and sister boat UB-17 which comprised an order of two submarines ordered…" to make it really redundant? Or I could just change the ordered to placed. :) — Bellhalla (talk) 14:06, 18 March 2009 (UTC)

• Factually Accurate: Pass

• Broad in its coverage: Looks good, pass

• Neutral: I see no issues, pass

• Stable: Pass

• Images: Everything checks out, valid fair-use for File:German submarine SM UB-16.jpg - Pass

Very nice work, Belhalla. Parsecboy (talk) 21:43, 17 March 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for taking the time to review the article. — Bellhalla (talk) 14:06, 18 March 2009 (UTC)