Talk:Sary Shagan

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I have completed the B class checklist for the Military History project and believe this to be a Start class article. I believe that it could be improved by addressing the following:

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This is a link to a photo essay on the remains at Sary Shagan (in Russian) http://www.olgino.info/index.php?ind=reviews&op=entry_view&iden=36 Secretlondon (talk) 01:41, 8 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This is a link to news article from 2009 (in Russian) on the remaining 'Dnepr' radar, linked to by Russian wikipedia. Http://www.novosti-kosmonavtiki.ru/content/numbers/320/34.shtml Secretlondon (talk) 02:33, 8 January 2012 (UTC) Link to article (in Khazak I think) on the further collapse of the Daryal radar: http://stan.tv/news/14272/ Secretlondon (talk) 03:09, 8 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]