Talk:Scotland in the modern era/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Buffbills7701 (talk · contribs) 11:50, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
Well-Written[edit]
1A[edit]
This article uses British English, and since I'm American, I had a bit of trouble with words like emigration/immigration and per cent/percent.
1B[edit]
Clears the lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation in the MoS easily.
Factually Accurate[edit]
2A[edit]
It contains a list of all the references.
2B[edit]
There were surprisingly few references in the lead and 19th century politics section. Could you add more?
2C[edit]
Along with no references, I saw some unsourced facts in the lead, which forces me to believe there is original research.
Broad in its Coverage[edit]
3A[edit]
This article addresses all of the points about Scotland in the modern era.
3B[edit]
The article stays on it's main topic without going into trivial detail.
Neutral[edit]
It clearly shows all of the sides of Scotland's modern history.
Stable[edit]
No recent edit wars found.
Appropriately Illustrated[edit]
6A[edit]
I noticed that 5 of the pictures don't have a US public domain tag. I don't know much about pictures, so correct me if I'm wrong, but that means I can't accept it right now.
Alright, you got the plus here.
6B[edit]
All pictures are suitable, and have reasonable captions.
Notes:[edit]
- I noticed that there weren't any references in the lead. Could you find some references for it?
- "Scottish universities would admit women from 1892." Could you clear that statement up a bit more? Would they do it past 1892, or only 1892?
- Why is art education capitalized in "Aberdeen born William Dyce (1806-1864), emerged as one of the most significant figures in Art Education in the United Kingdom."?
Final Verdict[edit]
I have decided to put it on hold for a week, and if you are able to find some sources for the lead, I will pass it. buffbills7701 13:10, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
- It is not normal to have sources in the lead, unless there is something controversial or a quotation (See WP:LEADCITE). It is all sourced in the main body. I will go fix the PD tags.--SabreBD (talk) 14:39, 28 June 2013 (UTC)