Talk:So Yesterday/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: --CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 22:40, 8 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead

• breakup with her boyfriend declaring -> boyfriend,
• contemporary critics -> I don't think we can call them contemporary lol.
• who broke up with her -> I don't like this, try re-wording
• and Best of Hilary Duff (2008). It is also featured on the music video game Band Hero -> make one sentence. (2008) and on the music

 Done

Background

• I don't see how the first 3 lines are relevant to this article. This is not her singing debut. It would go well on her bio or first single.
• by "The Matrix", for Metamorphosis -> too repetitive. Try the album

 Done

Composition

• Nice

Release and reception

• Really nice!

Chart performance

• Good

Music video

• Good

Live performances

• Nice

Overall

• I'm really impressed Novice, you might soon have to change your name to Pro :P. Fix this and you've got yourself a GA :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 23:39, 13 December 2010 (UTC)
  • Thank you so much. I actually learned a lot from your GAs. Novice7 | Talk 05:12, 14 December 2010 (UTC)
    • Thank yoou :). Your all good!--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 06:14, 14 December 2010 (UTC)