Talk:Spirit Squad/GA1

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:28, 6 February 2010 (UTC)

Overall this is a pretty good article, though I do have some issues:

  • "The Spirit Squad was a professional wrestling tag team in World Wrestling Entertainment (WWE) based on the Raw brand, and in WWE's developmental territory Ohio Valley Wrestling (OVW)." I would split this into two sentences, with the second noting its brand. If it looks bad split we can reverse it of course.
  • "DX played various sophomoric pranks on the Squad and the McMahons" Adding in a couple examples might help beef up the article and make for interesting reading.

Everything else checks out, so I'll put this on hold and pass upon completion. Only a couple things so it won't take long. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:28, 6 February 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. :) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 22:52, 6 February 2010 (UTC)
No problem. Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 00:48, 7 February 2010 (UTC)