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Reviewer: Dwaipayanc (talk · contribs) 03:55, 3 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

This sounds like an interesting film, and having more material than many of the other articles on films of Indies during that era. I will start the review soon.--Dwaipayan (talk) 03:55, 3 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • "Djoekri's son Joesoef (Mohammad Sani), however, leads a life of plenty" Do we need this however? Is it used to contrast with unfortunate life of Mochtar?
  • "...takes him on in a battle" was it a duel (if info is available)?
  • "Tan, who had made his directorial debut in 1940, based the stories surrounding Zorro..." Why use "stories"? Did he use Zorro as inspiration for other films, too? That's not clear here I think.
  • Do you think Zorro needs a small description?
  • "Sources disagree on which version served as the inspiration. Biran (2009, p. 274) credits Son of Zorro (1947), while Kristanto (Filmindonesia.or.id, Srigala Item) credits The Mark of Zorro (1940)." But Sonf of Zorro is in 1947, so how can it be the inspiration?