Talk:Stéphane Sparagna/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"He made his debut for the club in their Ligue 2 opener on 30 July 2016," - I know what opener means but I think opening game would be better
"playing the full 90 minutes in a 0-0 draw with Red Star." - needs the longer hyphen for consistency.

Overall prose is good. Awaiting response on all points. MWright96 (talk) 07:22, 18 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the review MWright96. I have made the following changes as per your recommendations.

France has been delinked in the lead and infobox
"on loan Marseille" now reads "on loan from Marseille"
the wikilink Exhibition match#Club football is now used for the word "friendly"
"He made his debut for the club in their Ligue 2 opener on 30 July 2016," no reads "He made his debut for the club in their opening Ligue 2 game on..."
A longer hyphen has been inserted in relation to the draw with Red Star
- Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 11:14, 18 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]