Talk:Stéphane Sparagna
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![]() | Stéphane Sparagna has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: August 18, 2016. (Reviewed version). |
![]() | A fact from Stéphane Sparagna appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 23 August 2016 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 18:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
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Lead
[edit]- Delink France in the prose and infobox per WP:OVERLINK
- "on loan Marseille," - missing "to"
Marseille
[edit]- The wikilink on the word "friendly" should be to Exhibition match#Club football
2016-17 season: Loan to Auxerre
[edit]- "He made his debut for the club in their Ligue 2 opener on 30 July 2016," - I know what opener means but I think opening game would be better
- "playing the full 90 minutes in a 0-0 draw with Red Star." - needs the longer hyphen for consistency.
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[edit]Overall prose is good. Awaiting response on all points. MWright96 (talk) 07:22, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
Summary of Fixes
[edit]Thank you for the review MWright96. I have made the following changes as per your recommendations.
- France has been delinked in the lead and infobox
- "on loan Marseille" now reads "on loan from Marseille"
- the wikilink Exhibition match#Club football is now used for the word "friendly"
- "He made his debut for the club in their Ligue 2 opener on 30 July 2016," no reads "He made his debut for the club in their opening Ligue 2 game on..."
- A longer hyphen has been inserted in relation to the draw with Red Star
- Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 11:14, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
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