Talk:St. Joseph's Home for the Aged
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| Greetings.
I have a few recommendations to make on the article. One major change should be to organise the content of the page. It seems that some of the content is either repeated information, or information that is placed under a new sub/heading even though it could be placed under an existing one. When posting new content, please take note of the existing content on the page. I have also noticed that the some of the references are not properly cited. Please cite references properly so that viewers understand where the information comes from. I suggest following the Turbian citation style. Lastly, it would be helpful if those who have uploaded images put a description. "Dormitory A of St. Joseph's Home for the Aged" will suffice. At least viewers will know what the image is of. With that said, a big thank you to those have contributed to this article. 2006672051kang09 (talk) 14:10, 17 October 2009 (UTC) | |
Last edited at 01:54, 1 January 2012 (UTC). Substituted at 06:50, 30 April 2016 (UTC)