GA on hold
Overall, this article looks good. However, I have a few concerns.
- Just a comment, not a fan of the current picture. It looks like she's doing a Budweiser commercial. "Wassssssuuuupppp!"
- I'm not either because I think it makes her face look fat. If she stays involved in the current McMahons vs. Legacy storyline, I think it is safe to assume that someone will take a better one. Nikki♥311 21:16, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- Is that all you can find for her early life? It seems a little short and stubby. I seem to remember that she did modeling for their magazine, modeling shirts and such, when she was younger.
- You're right. I've added that and a bit more. If it still seems short, maybe I could merge it into the personal life section at the end. Nikki♥311 21:16, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- Wikify "low blow", incase readers come to the page wondering what exactly a low blow is.
- "McMahon later became Angle's manager and was in his corner when he defeated The Rock for the WWF Championship at No Mercy. The alliance was short lived, as The Rock performed his Rock Bottom maneuver on Stephanie at No Mercy." The second sentence makes it sound like she was in the Rock's corner. Maybe you could clarify/elaborate on why Angle and McMahon split up?
- "On the March 25 episode of Raw, Jericho and McMahon lost to Triple H in a Triple Threat match for the Undisputed Championship, with the stipulation that, if McMahon was pinned, she would be forced to leave the WWF." So, who was pinned?
- "In October 2005, she was involved in the firing of Raw announcer Jim Ross." How exactly was she involved? What did she do?
- She fired him. :)
- Some of the Backstage roles could use some wikifying. :)
- The last paragraph of "Personal life" could be placed into another paragraph, it's a littly stubby by itself.
- I just removed it. The link was dead, and I couldn't find a suitable replacement. There wasn't much more to say about it anyway. Nikki♥311 21:38, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
Until my concerns have been addressed, I will place this article on hold. Please leave a message on my talkpage when you have addressed my concerns, or if you have any questions. Good work so far! CarpetCrawlermessage me 17:09, 29 April 2009 (UTC)