Talk:Strawberry Bubblegum/GA2

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Reviewer: EditorE (talk · contribs) 23:34, 25 August 2013 (UTC)

Alright, I guess I'll take this one, but I notice a problem. I really don't see the need for a "Background and production", since this basically talks about the development of the entire album (which we can let the 20/20 experience article discuss), and we could let the people who did there jobs and the locations just simply be listed in the personnel section without the need of this being discussed in prose in another section. 和DITOREtails 23:34, 25 August 2013 (UTC)

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There needs to be author

information for refs 6, 9,
13, 16, 23, 28, and 29.

01:54, 26 August 2013 (UTC)  Done
What the hell's up with
the author info for ref 26?
"Sean Daly, Times Pop Music
Critic View all Articles" Should
"Sean Daily" be the author
presented?
01:54, 26 August 2013 (UTC)  Done
Date for ref 2 needs to be put 01:54, 26 August 2013 (UTC)  Done
In ref 11, try replacing the "(" ")"
with "[" "]" to make it look clearer.
01:54, 26 August 2013 (UTC)  Done
In ref 27, "Kitty Empire" --> "Empire, Kitty" 13:15, 26 August 2013 (UTC)  Done
And also, author needed for ref 30. 13:17, 26 August 2013 (UTC)  Done
I'm still questioning the "Writing
and production" section of this article. Again,
listing the people involved in
making this song in the
"Personnel" section is just fine, and
"Writing and production" sections
are not requirments for
a good article.
17:17, 28 August 2013 (UTC)
Overall, the article looks fine to me and I'll be happy to pass it.