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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:30, 24 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review. MWright96 (talk) 19:30, 24 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
  • no dead links
  • Everything stated in the article is cited correctly

Lede

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  • Wildcard should be one word as in the body

Background

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  • Delink West Germany in the lede and background section
  • Do the same for Soviet Union
  • Change "100 m" and "200 m" to 100 metres and 200 metres for the ordinary reader - also same issue is in the lede
  • Delink Swaziland Olympic and Commonwealth Games Association at the second instance it is mentioned

Athletics

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  • "he finished sixth within his heat of the men's 200 m" - 200 metres
  • Add how Ndzinisa qualified for Rio 2016.
  • "He finished ahead of Levi Cadogan of Barbados (21.02 seconds) and Tega Odele of Ghana (21.25 seconds)" - Ghana's Tega Odele
  • "with a time of 12.49." - 12.49 seconds
  • "Since she failed to finish in the two two places," - first

Notes

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  • Italicise Times of Swaziland
  • Remove the second and third wikilinks to Sports Reference
  • Added a link to Swazi Observer

Must say this was a good read. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 20:37, 24 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thanks again for reviewing; I've made those modifications and added the expansion as requested. Miyagawa (talk) 22:45, 24 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Miyagawa: Good. Promoting to GA. MWright96 (talk) 05:48, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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