Talk:Talon (roller coaster)/GA1
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 16:55, 12 April 2013 (UTC) I will be reviewing this article along with Hydra the Revenge. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 16:55, 12 April 2013 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
As I do not see a reference elsewhere, I will require a citation be given for the following posit: "Talon was known to be one of the longest inverted roller coaster in the Northeast when it opened in 2001."
All else is good within the lead!
- Dom added a couple of sources to the lead. I also added a line in the history section with a different source. Themeparkgc Talk 00:36, 13 April 2013 (UTC)
Infobox[edit]
All is fine here.
History[edit]
Excellent adducing! However, if possible, I would like to see a mention of the design process of Bollinger and Mabillard within the History section.
- Though that would be excellent, B&M's design/manufacturing process is top secret (for competition reasons).--Dom497 (talk) 20:09, 12 April 2013 (UTC)
Ride experience[edit]
This section is fine.
Trains[edit]
The one reference given is applicable to the entire section.
Track[edit]
Excellent!
Awards[edit]
Fine here.
Conclusion[edit]
All sections pass, aside from the lead, which needs just one small addition. The pictures are also suitable for utilization. Therefore, I will pass this article as soon as all proposed changes are made. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 17:18, 12 April 2013 (UTC)