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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 21:27, 14 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 21:27, 14 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • A few comments for now:
  • Please reorder citations that look like this "[1][24][13]"
    • Had to reorder twice due to some technical glitch
  • Last sentence in article lacks a full stop.
    • Lst sentences have been deleted as they were posted by some other user
  • Last couple sentences in the article lacks a citation
    • Last sentence without citation deleted
  • Why does it have "tourism website" on the bottom of the page?
    • Some other user has added this much later than my posting the artcile for GAN. Te sentences stand deleted now.
  • The last sentence is a travel suggestion. I'm pretty sure that falls evenly into "What Wikipedia is not".
    • Some other user has added this much later than my posting the artcile for GAN. Te sentences stand deleted now.
  • What source does the "Shakya 2012" cite point to?
    • Over sight miss. Now fixed reference with correct page number

--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 11:56, 17 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Two last comments:
    • Hopefully I have done it wherever I could locate in the text.
    • Cited now