Talk:Tawang Monastery

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Tawang Monastery/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 21:27, 14 August 2015 (UTC)

Will start soon.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 21:27, 14 August 2015 (UTC)

  • A few comments for now:
  • Please reorder citations that look like this "[1][24][13]"
    • Had to reorder twice due to some technical glitch
  • Last sentence in article lacks a full stop.
    • Lst sentences have been deleted as they were posted by some other user
  • Last couple sentences in the article lacks a citation
    • Last sentence without citation deleted
  • Why does it have "tourism website" on the bottom of the page?
    • Some other user has added this much later than my posting the artcile for GAN. Te sentences stand deleted now.
  • The last sentence is a travel suggestion. I'm pretty sure that falls evenly into "What Wikipedia is not".
    • Some other user has added this much later than my posting the artcile for GAN. Te sentences stand deleted now.
  • What source does the "Shakya 2012" cite point to?
    • Over sight miss. Now fixed reference with correct page number

--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 11:56, 17 August 2015 (UTC)

  • @Tomandjerry211 (alt): Thanks for the review. I have addressed all above issues. Any other suggestions welcome.--Nvvchar. 13:56, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
  • Two last comments:
  • Please use AmE or BrE, not both. Examples include "centre, honour, travelled" vs "meter, defense and -ization".--Tomandjerry211 (alt)talk) 14:32, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
    • Hopefully I have done it wherever I could locate in the text.
    • Cited now
  • @Tomandjerry211 (alt): Thanks you very much for approving this GAN. Every time you approve I have to make a request to leave message of its approval on my talk page as the auto bot does not work on my page.--Nvvchar. 00:28, 19 August 2015 (UTC)