Talk:Tekken 6/GA1

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Reviewer: TeenAngels1234 (talk · contribs) 08:17, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I'm gonna review this article. Stay tuned.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 08:17, 25 September 2022 (UTC) Okay. Sorry, I was busy in RL. So, let's go.[reply]

Are you sure the last part of 'Gameplay' is not more appropriate for 'Development'?
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"They avoided this for the spinoff Tekken Tag Tournament, which only allowed alternating use of four fighters". Is this really necessary? It seems a bit superfluous.
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"Preorders ... wireless controller.". Ditto.
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"Harada referred ... recreation of the arcade game'. Again, these seem to me to be comments that add little of information to the article.
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I would suggest removing a few names from the list of musicians. Maybe stay only those with wlinks, which seem to me more relevant and encyclopedic to mention.
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Shiina's appreciative comment also seems unencyclopedic to me.
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I would shorten some critic's opinions, reducing them to the bone, especially in the first few paragraphs. I would put a few more commas, too.
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@Tintor2:That's all. Good job. Already a pretty good article.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 11:23, 30 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@TeenAngels1234: Rearranged most of the content involved the reception too. Thanks for the review.Tintor2 (talk) 18:48, 30 September 2022 (UTC) @TeenAngels1234: Did I miss something by any chance?Tintor2 (talk) 13:04, 2 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Tintor2: No, no. I'm just still busy. Today I'm gonna read the full article again, and, if nothing emerges, I'll promote it. Don't worry :')--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 13:51, 2 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Okay. So:

"It was compared the style". Maybe 'The style was compared" is better.
You should correct the following "response".
"When the work was concluded, Matsuyama was surprised at how well Lars fitted in with the game's cast" sounds kinda trivial to me.
"However, Harada revealed they had encountered difficulties". Is the 'however' necessary?

@Tintor2: Good work~

@TeenAngels1234: I think I covered anything but can't find that however.Tintor2 (talk) 23:22, 2 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Don't worry. Promoted. Good prose, good sources, and good information.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 00:34, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]