Talk:The Convention (The Office)/GA1
GA Review
[edit]- Reference #3 is blacklisted
- Format 4 and 5 references correctly
- Quote seems to be missing in ""Any episode that places Michael and Dwight outside of their normal office environment is set up for some very funny (and usually awkward) situations and "The Convention" is no exception."
- at.[6]"" – refs go after punctuation per WP:FN
- rename "Synopsis" to "Plot" to follow the other episode formats
Gary King (talk) 19:36, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
If this entire thing is a quote:
"Any episode that places Michael and Dwight outside of their normal office environment is set up for some very funny (and usually awkward) situations and "The Convention" is no exception. Some of the episode's best uncomfortable moments centered on Michael believing he's the life of the party and that he's Jim's friend. Michael and Dwight pretending to laugh along to an inside joke made by Jim's new boss, Josh, is a prime example. Michael's comment, "I love inside jokes. Love to be part of one someday," creates the kind of uncomfortable silence that The Office excels at."
Then I suggest using {{quote}} as it's really, really long for inline. Also, quotes inside quotes need to use single quotes, not double. Gary King (talk) 18:55, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
Reception is way too short. Look at other episode articles. They've got Nielson Ratings, and more than just a huge quote. Gary King (talk) 19:43, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
- Seeing as how the nominator hasn't worked with the article in the past four days, I've gone ahead and added in the requested information. Mastrchf (t/c) 20:13, 20 July 2008 (UTC)
- Nice job, as always. Passing Gary King (talk) 20:19, 20 July 2008 (UTC)