Talk:The Education of Everett Richardson
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 22:27, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
Looks interesting, I will take this. Posting my comments in a week. Cheers, Sainsf (knock knock · am I there?) 22:27, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
Really sorry for the delay, got some work. So here are all my comments: Sainsf · (How ya doin'?) 06:21, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
- General
- No copyvio, duplink, dablink and external link issues
- Why is there no infobox as in most GAs (say Acquainted with the Night (book) for example)
- Also, I would like the article structure to be like the above mentioned GA for example. I especially would like the section titles altered, and the background and content described in the first 3 sections to be summarized much more and distributed into two proper sections. "Structure of the book" section should probably be higher up. Also no Publication details?
- Prose and coverage
- No comma in
Canadian writer, Silver Donald Cameron
As its title suggests...
Not sure I get the information in this line from the title. Also Everett Richardson should be mentioned in this line.the clergy,The Chronicle Herald,
space"this is not a story of the fishermen
There are no closing quotesCameron points out that, in Nova Scotia
Specify that he specifies this in the book. Else it sounds a bit like discussion on the book and not the content- Link trawlerman (first mention in main text)
- Expand UFAWU on first mention in main text
- I think I will review the middle 2 sections after some much-needed summarization is done.
- If a set of consecutive lines is supported by one ref then put the ref at the end of the last line, no need for it to be after every line
Another interlude, entitled "Country Cunning and Unofficial Life"...
if ref 2 is the source put it at the end of the line before the one which starts the quote.
Failing due to inactivity since a week (and nominator is also away since 20 April). Sainsf · (How ya doin'?) 00:52, 11 May 2020 (UTC)