Talk:The Q (nightclub)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:27, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, The Rambling Man, and thanks for taking on this review! Armadillo pteryx 19:59, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

No worries, I'll try to get to it in the next couple of days. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:00, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"as game-changing" often written... in what sense?
The sources don't explicitly qualify the term, but from context it appears that "innovative" is synonymous in intention. I've swapped "game-changing" out of the lead but left it in the direct quote in the Reception section. Does that work?
"and DJ; Bob Fluet" is that semi-colon deliberate?
Ah, I get it. It's confusing for me. Why not just use commas to separate these folks?
It's because the list contains three items, each of which in turn contains one comma. Replacing the semicolons with commas would make it seem like a list of six separate items. I was following the guidance at MOS:SEMICOLON, which says: Semicolons are used in addition to commas to separate items in a listing, when commas alone would result in confusion.
"Gentlethem's Club" what's that?
A portmanteau of "gentlemen's club" and accusative singular they. I struggled to come up with a good wikilink target for this; definitely open to suggestions.
I think that explanation is fine, but should be a footnote. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:12, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done.
""20-foot ceilings" convert.
Done.
"queer movie" overlinked.
Done.
"Alvord of Thrillist called" overlinked.
Done.
"semi-drag queens were doing" overlinked.
Done.
"Michael Musto, describing" overlinked.
Done (and thanks for catching all those)!
""[e]ach floor" I'm okay with just "each floor" if all you're doing is decapping for sentence case here.
Done.

Tidy work, no major issues. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 21:19, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thank you for your helpful comments! Armadillo pteryx 01:28, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

No problem, one response above, but nothing to stop promotion. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:12, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I've now edited the article according to that response. Thank you for the review! Armadillo pteryx 12:56, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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