Talk:The twelve pyramids

The links are not directly provided by the USDA pyramid web-interface. The page is NECESSARY for the health of the nation and the rest of the world !!! —Preceding unsigned comment added by John.tornado (talk • contribs) 22:42, 16 April 2006

Cleanup needed

This page is an organizational mess with subjective use of language. It desperately needs to be cleaned up and rewritten. The boxes with the single links in them simply have to go. I don't know where to begin on editing this. I do not have the background to do a good job here. Expert attention needed. --Lendorien 00:37, 20 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I did a fair bit of reworking. The formatting is much better now, and I've deleted a lot of nonsense and added some useful information from the CNPP website, but the article could still use some work for sure. I'll come back to it if I have time, but I'd be happy to see someone else take a shot at it too. --edi 21:24, 16 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- Agreed. It's a far sight better than it was. It's readable now. Good job. I've made a couple edits here and there to formalize the language a little and changed the tage from cleanup to source. --Lendorien 22:40, 5 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]