Talk:Titan Quest: Immortal Throne/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: IDV (talk · contribs) 02:27, 19 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do this one. I expect to get it done within a day or two.--IDV^talk 02:27, 19 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead/infobox

Intervals for the publishers should use – rather than -.
While fine to list in prose under a "release" heading, in the infobox we generally only list release dates for major English-speaking regions+region of the developer/publisher, so the Japanese release date should probably be removed.

Gameplay

You should write NPCs as "non-playable characters" on the first mention.
I might be wrong here, but shouldn't it be "the player character attacks enemies highlighted with the mouse"? To me, "by the mouse" makes it sound like the mouse has a will of its own and isn't controlled by the player.
The main addition is a new Mastery titled Dream Mastery: available to new players, - sorry, what do you mean by "available to new players"?
The image is hard to read - I only see a brown field with colorful splodges on it. Could you perhaps specify what I'm looking at? If the player is shown (I can't tell - I haven't played the game), you could mention their location on screen, etc.

Plot

, is launching an attack on the living world now the more powerful Olympians - should be "now that the more powerful Olympians"

Development and release

Write out intellectual property in full and link it

Reception

There is a discussion about Steam Spy at the VG project's talk page about sources, and it seems like Steam Spy creates estimates, which may not necessarily be accurate. If a reliable source reports on the numbers, you can use that, but not Steam Spy itself.

Comments

@ProtoDrake: This article is pretty good, and just needs some minor fixes. I'm placing this On hold for a week; if everything is done by then, I'll pass the article.--IDV^talk 13:15, 19 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I've done my best to address the issues raised. --ProtoDrake (talk) 13:34, 19 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, that was quick! Congratulations, Titan Quest: Immortal Throne is now a

Good Article.--IDV^talk 14:36, 19 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]