Talk:Tuvalu at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 18:02, 10 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this shortly. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 18:02, 10 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comma after weightlifter in the intro.
"Tuvalu participated in two Summer Olympics between its debut in the 2008 Summer Olympics in Beijing, China and the 2012 Summer Olympics in London, United Kingdom." This is an awkward sentence, maybe say that Tuvalu has two under its belt between '08 and '12?
"Tuvalu sent their most number of athletes to any Olympic Games with three in their previous appearance. No Tuvaluan athlete has ever won a medal at the Olympic Games." First sentence is past tense, the second is present.
Maybe separate the historical background info (first three sentences) from the rest of the Background section.
Is there no "Tuvalu at the Olympics" infobox?
Images and the rest check out just fine.

Great article, there are a lot of "Blank nation at the blank Olympics" articles marked as Good, this is up to par. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 18:34, 19 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@QatarStarsLeague: Saw this GAN was idling about, so I made the fixes. Regarding the 'Tuvalu at the Olympics' infobox, I believe those were deleted some time. Pinging nominator MWright96. Dat Guy^Talk_Contribs 16:32, 1 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@DatGuy: @QatarStarsLeague: Thanks for making the edits in my absence. Sorry for me sitting on this for so long! MWright96 (talk) 16:47, 1 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 It has been only one editless month but perhaps QSL is inactive? Dat Guy^Talk_Contribs 18:09, 3 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

DatGuy Looking at his activity, the answer is yes. MWright96 (talk) 18:20, 3 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]