Talk:Typhoon Elsie (1989)/Archive 1

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Archive 1

Confusing sentence

"In addition to the three previous typhoons that impacted the country, the Government of Japan provided $300,000 and the Government of the UniStates donated $25,000." I'm not sure what this means; some rewording seems necessary. –Juliancolton | ^Talk 16:24, 18 November 2009 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: –Juliancolton | ^Talk 02:27, 19 November 2009 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS):
Prose is generally good, except for this: "By October 15, Elise began to take a "stair-stepped" track to the west-northwest and intensified." What does "stair-stepped" mean...?
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

One minor issue before I can pass it. Good work! –Juliancolton | ^Talk 02:27, 19 November 2009 (UTC)

Corrected the issue, thanks for the review JC. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:06, 19 November 2009 (UTC)

Tasing

Per: the UN: Elsies local name was Tasing. Ive added a few bits on deaths/damages (D&Ds) based on an NDCC sheet of D&Ds.Jason Rees (talk) 03:44, 20 December 2009 (UTC)