Talk:Typhoon Yunya (1991)/GA1
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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 04:58, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
Infobox
- Probably worth adding the lahar-related deaths.
Lead
- Similar comment re Diding — Any information on its naming, and how about adding to body of article?
a strong tropical cyclone that weakened before impacting the Philippines
— Winds itself in a bit of a circle. Is it really first-sentence worthy?
Meteorological history
On June 11, 1991,
— You read my mind on that one.- Tropical Upper Tropospheric Trough — Why the caps?
USNS Spica
— This thing?Although already a tropical storm, the JTWC
— First the JTWC struck Hainan, and now it's a tropical storm? Mind you, that might explain how it was able to strike Hainan...
Impact
destroyed bridges Santa Fe
— in Santa Fe? Anything to link to for Santa Fe?prompting concern from residents
— Any more details?carried ash within 160 km (100 mi) away from Pinatubo,
— within/away sounds contradictory.As a result of the lahars, ... As a result of the lahars,
— Repetition.- Just to confirm, so two bus-terminal rooves collapsed?
Excluding from laharsh
— lahars?
Overall
- Yellow Evan, comments above. --Usernameunique (talk) 06:21, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
- No problem, Yellow Evan. Passing now. --Usernameunique (talk) 04:30, 29 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)