Talk:USS Michigan (BB-27)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:50, 22 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:50, 22 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Sturmvogel 66: - lost track of this? Parsecboy (talk) 18:02, 30 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

No such luck!

No DABs, DANFS link failed.
Images appropriately licensed.
Fix the conversion in the lede with a "|0".
- Done
Link scrap in infobox and lede, main and secondary battery and broadside
- Added
  - Not entirely, last three items still need links.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:06, 31 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
    - Whoops, wan't reading carefully enough, apparently. Done now.
      - <snicker> Not exactly. Still need to do main battery, and now add one more for overhaul.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:38, 31 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Proper terminology is "cage mast".
- Fixed
Anything known about casualties or damage from the 1916 gun explosion?
- Nothing I've been able to find.
What does slipped mean? Fell off?
- Reworded
Be sure to make the same changes to South Carolina if relevant.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:23, 31 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Done there too. Parsecboy (talk) 10:32, 31 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  - ~~What about the DANFS link~~?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:02, 31 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
    - Huh, working now.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:06, 31 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
      - Gotta love DANFS... Parsecboy (talk) 16:32, 31 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
        Went ahead and added a link for overhaul myself as your ability to analyze details seems to be impaired today ;-) Plus I'm getting tired of looking at this review, so I'm promoting it.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:53, 31 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
        Huh, I know I added the link to overhaul - I specifically remember typing out the :wikt:overhaul link - and somehow it wasn't in my edit. Strange. Parsecboy (talk) 19:57, 31 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]