Talk:Wake Me Up (Girls Aloud song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 12:14, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

General

2 Dead links need to be removed, or find an alternate source.
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Info box

Do an external link for the music video too like on "Love Machine"
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Use a time length template.
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

"; however, it" → ", however it"
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"was deemed too hard sounding" → "was deemed as sounding too harsh"
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"didn't" → "did not"
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Paul Woods, Yusra Maru'e" → "Paul Woods and Yusra Maru'e"
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
If you are going to quote in the Lead, you need to source it and place a reference.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Link music critics
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
", with a few deeming it as predictable, and an attempt to recapture the sound of older releases." → ". While some described it as predictable, others wrote that it appeared to be an attempt to recapture the sound of some of their previous release."
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
""Wake Me Up" debuted and peaked at number 4 on the Official Charts Company in the United Kingdom," → ""Wake Me Up" debuted and peaked at number 4 on the UK Singles Chart,"
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Link music video
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"was performed on every of" → "has been performed on all of"
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"lend" → "lent"
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Background and release

Link Polydor, Xenomania, Girls Aloud etc.
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
""When the second album came round, the label said, 'Listen, we're not going to do this group any more if you don't do it.'" Higgins explained." → "Higgin's explained that Polydor were not going to continue with the group's contract unless he produced songs for the album" (Apply this to "Love Machine", it escaped my eyes).
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"I think my initial reaction was to do a few tracks and he said, 'No, you have to do this because I think you're the only person who understands exactly what it is'. So, that's how we took it on." → He continued, saying that his initial reaction was that he thought he would only be required to produce a couple of songs, however Polydor insisted that he produce the album in its entirety and that they thought only he understood what they wanted." (Apply this to "Love Machine").
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"it was deemed too hard sounding and the record company didn't want to take the risk." → Use what I wrote about this in the lead here. Also, a source?
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
There is no commentary on the alternate cover, so it needs to go.
Removed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

As I said above, make a Composition section. Or if you feel that both sections would be too short, rename it simply to "Composition and critical reception". And then put the audio file here.
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Chart performance

Pretty short, I'd just move it to the Charts section above the table and have it all as one section.
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"on the Official Charts Company in the United Kingdom" → "on the UK Singles Chart"
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances

"lend" → "lent"
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"Girls Aloud perform" → "the group performed"

Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Charts

Apply the WP:ACCESS with the shaded column like on "Love Machine"

References

FN1 isn't a review??
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
FN2: Link BBC and BBC News
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Whenever you mention a work or publisher for the first time, link it. All subsequent times should not be linked. Check for this.
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Status

On hold for 7 days. (Little tip, apply things mentioned here to other nominations of yours). AARON• ^TALK 12:53, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. AARON• ^TALK 02:27, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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