Talk:Wake Up and Escape from the Citadel/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: 23W (talk · contribs) 04:21, 19 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@Gen. Quon: Will take (again). Expect a review in the week or next week. ₂₃W 04:21, 19 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

@Gen. Quon: Reviewing this now since I'm going on break until January. The merge looks good, but here are some comments:

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
Lead is way too long at four paragraphs, should be shortened to at most two per WP:LEADLENGTH (I know other episode articles have three, but even those are looking too long).
I merged it into three. How does it look now? I know it's still a bit long, but considering this is two episodes smashed into one article, I feel it makes sense.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
All sources are reliable, and the self-published sources are acceptable per WP:ABOUTSELF.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
Why did you get rid of the cultural references section of Escape from the Citadel? I thought that was cool, and it gave the io9 source.
Whoops. I just forgot to move it. It's there now.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
I could pick on the lengthy quotes in the reception section, but overall this looks nice. Can't really pick on the prose much. On hold for two weeks. ₂₃W 01:00, 24 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry for the delay. How's it look now?--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
@Gen. Quon: Looks good! Though if you take it to FAC, I'd recommend reordering the lead and reception section for length's sake. Pass. ₂₃W 04:10, 25 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]