Talk:Weight loss coaching
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[edit]I edited the opening paragraph, as well as added new information to the early days category. I added new citations, and tried to make the article less "wordy" by fixing run on sentences and grammatical errors. I think the article being easier to read will help viewers understand the information better. Vinceo0316 (talk) 22:58, 6 April 2022 (UTC)