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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 23:29, 27 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • studio album by Australian electronic music group → you can use "recorded by Australian" here for better fashion
  • The album's production was stalled due → use "The record's" here for alternation
  • Add year of release in brackets for King Kong'
  • fashion to making a mixtape → fashion of making a mixtape
  • Release year in brackets for "Frankie Sinatra"
  • Link "Critics" to Music journalism
  • The album was also a commercial success → The record also experienced commercial success (alternation + WP:FANCRUFT)
  • it was a number-one album in the band's home country of Australia and a top-ten album in Scotland and the UK. → it reached number one in the band's native Australia and the top 10 in Scotland and the United Kingdom
  • They plan to release these tracks "within a year" → use "songs" here for alternation
  • provide a fresh start → omit "fresh" here as it's unencyclopedic

Infobox

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  • flawless ;)

Background

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  • was with Luke Steele in 2003 creating → comma before "creating"
  • Release year of "Colours" in brackets
  • considered for the album, but no estimated → state "record" here for alternation
  • album's delay, however no new → , to ;
  • providing a track name of "Frank Sinatra" → providing a track named "Frank Sinatra"
  • musician David Berman reading a poem he composed → comma before "reading"
  • combined into a new album. This was a similar process → combined into a new album, marking a similar process
  • In regard to the group's second album → use "the band's" here for alternation
  • February 2014: "Album sounds → : to ,

Production and composition

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  • because he was using Studio Vision → for his Studio Vision
  • The group worked with multiple guest → state "The band" here for alternation
  • and violinist Warren Ellis featured → ...was featured
  • Release year for Madvillainy in brackets
  • Release year for Uptown Saturday Night in brackets
  • every track on the album → use "record" here for alternation
  • was done by Pat Shannahan in Los Angeles who also cleared → comma before "who"
  • The track would have not been → use "the song" here for alternation
  • not be cleared.[8][18][3][25] → refs in numerical order
  • release these tracks that were closely related to Wildflower → use "these recordings" here for alternation

Styles and themes

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  • Unlink Australia as it's a common term
  • for the quote, fix - to –
  • Add release year for There's a Riot Goin' On in brackets
  • draw from the album's rebellious counter-culture nature, but their cover has a more psychedelic style → draw from the record's rebellious counter-culture nature, however approaching a more psychedelic style.

Release

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  • May, the group posted a video → use "the band" here for alternation
  • Link "lead single" to its respective article here
  • after the track debut → after the track's debut
  • The album was promoted through a heavy advertising → use "It" here for alternation
  • with TV → write out here to "television"

Reception

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  • Link "critics" to Music critics here, as well
  • radio DJ → radio disc jockey
  • foggy sound... reveals → foggy sound [...] reveals
  • and ultimately calling the album "a faded → "calling" to "called"

Track listing

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  • Remove all album credit citations from "Contains samples of", and add the sentence "Credits adapted from the liner notes of Wildflower.[57]" atop the subtopic

Personnel

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  • Credits according to album notes:[57] → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Wildflower.[57]

Charts

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  • flawless ;)

Release history

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  • Unlink formats and labels
  • Add references to the release on 1 July and 8 July

Other stuff

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Copy-violation

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  • 47.4% is WAY too much! Please look for the first two sources at the top of the list and reduce the content from them in the article's body

Images and others

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  • Images and samples perfectly illustrate the article
  • Sample seems stable ;)
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References

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  • Please avoid WP:SHOUTING in several refs!!
  • As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article.
  • 1 dead link!! Please fix this!

Outcome

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The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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