Talk:ZoomTown

Added "inappropriate tone" flag - this reads like a combination of advertising and a disgruntled tech support person... frankh 22:18, 2 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Well, I guess I'm the one who wrote most of the article, and I'm frankly dumbfounded by your assessment of the article. With just four sentences of basic information, I'm not sure how I can make it sound less "disgruntled", but I've tried. Feel free to fix it up further. – Minh Nguyễn (talk, contribs) 20:07, 16 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I attempted to improve some of the wording in the entry. But I think it would be better if the contents of this page were combined with the entry on Cincinnati Bell. An entry this short seems out of place by itself.--Janus657 18:56, 12 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]