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Hartington City Hall and Auditorium

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Archived nomination
The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk)

Hartington City Hall and Auditorium

Created by Frankie Rae (talk), Ammodramus (talk). Self nom at 03:03, 7 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Well-written and well-sourced. The hook is supported by both online and offline sources. Free image. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 04:20, 7 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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Comments/discussion: Hook is over the limit at 215 letters. Also missing the phrase (pictured).

How about this hook instead?
... that the Hartington City Hall and Auditorium (pictured) is a Prairie School design built when that style was in decline and "stands as a progressive building in an otherwise conservative community"?
... or does the ellipsis count in the characters as well? Thanks!
--Frankie Rae (talk) 23:08, 7 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
This is my first time reviewing a DYK, so I don't know about the ellipsis. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 23:19, 7 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Well, that's only fair: it's my first DYK nomination. Thanks! --Frankie Rae (talk) 23:27, 7 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
If the ellipsis counts, then perhaps:
... that the Hartington City Hall and Auditorium (pictured), a Prairie School design built when that style was in decline, "stands as a progressive building in an otherwise conservative community"?
--Frankie Rae (talk) 01:32, 8 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I see in Wikipedia:Did you know/Additional rules#Other additional rules for the hook that the ellipsis doesn't count. As a result, I would prefer to use the middle hook rather than the last one. --Frankie Rae (talk) 19:30, 8 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]