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Who is Simon Miller?

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk)

... that actress Christine Baranski (pictured) turned down a vacation in Paris to appear in the television film Who is Simon Miller?

Reviewed: Kenneth R. Shadrick ([1])

Created by Hunter Kahn (talk). Self nom at 03:52, 9 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

Hook

Length, format, content rules: Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 04:30, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Source: OK Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 04:30, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Interest: not sure
Image suitability, if applicable: Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 04:30, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
ALT hooks, if proposed:

Article

Length: OK Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 04:18, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Vintage: OK Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 04:18, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): OK Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 04:30, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Neutrality: OK Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 04:30, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: OK Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 04:30, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Copyvio: OK Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 04:37, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting:

Comments/discussion:

Everything is OK, but I am not sure if the hook is interesting enough. Am I wrong? Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 04:37, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Currently marked a stub. As for the hook, ALT2 ... that actress Christine Baranski (pictured) canceled a birthday trip to Paris to appear in the television film Who is Simon Miller? Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:12, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

OK. I prefer ALT2. It is no longer marked as stub. Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 12:37, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]