User:AbelsFriend
Appearance
Potential articles
[edit]- 3D printing
- This article has issues in some of the later sections about getting too intricate with suggestions to instead summarise the info to not clutter the page
- Chow Chow
- In general, the note for this page requests more sources and a rewrite for better quality
- The talk page mentions some edits (like including the history of the name, especially since this article is apparently part of WikiProject China to work on coverage of Chinese culture or improving the language so it reads less technical) that are valid but have not been implemented yet
- Car chase
- One of the sections in this article reads like an essay
- The part talking about film and television depictions might benefit from being organised more like the video game depictions section (bulleted list of notable ones)
- Tram accident
- After the first heading, the article stops using subheadings, so there are large walls of text that are hard to read
- The section "analysis and consequences" doesn't seem to be that relevant since the causes can be added onto the "causes" section, and the consequences are just... death or injury... and there's also an additional article that is a list of tram accidents where all the specific cases mentioned here can go
- Face tattoo
- As pointed out in the Talk page, the headings of this article imply traditional tattooing no longer applies because there is a separate heading for "Modern Day"
- The initial text in that section should also be rewritten to be less combative toward face tattoos (and probably include a subheading like "social stigma")
- The list of examples of common face tattoos and their meanings could also be better compiled under a separate subheading
Good Articles
[edit]- Canoe River train crash
- Electric vehicle warning sounds
- Australian Cattle Dog
- Wikipedia:WikiProject Dogs
- If I do the Chow Chow, this page has a recommended organisation format for all their dog breed articles
- Wikipedia:WikiProject Dogs
- Trivialist APR 2020
- copyediting throughout
- notably removed title case formatting on headings and subheadings
- GWR 2019 JULY 2019
- reorganised some information to other, more relevant sections
- summarised or omitted sections with unnecessary detail
- Non-puffin APR 2015
- rewrote several sections for relevance and proper language
- reorganised some text into other sections
- Crosshouses DEC 2012
- deleted gallery section
- Pöllö~enwiki JUNE 2007~FEB 2010
- creator of the page
- new content with sources
- new pictures
- AdoTang OCT 2020~DEC 2022
- revised or rewrote content for conciseness and accuracy
- replaced outdated pictures
- FobTown JULY 2022
- added a new section on CGI (for car chases in movies)
- Xavierltzm DEC 2021
- retitled headings
- created new subheadings
- the major formatting change that distinguishes the initial article when it was created to the current one
- Southpark20 JULY 2019
- removed irrelevant content from "video games" section (and justified its existence in the article)
- 2a02:c7d:208:100:309a:8214:7ffe:69df vs Serols JAN 2018
- interesting set of edits by 2a deleting whole sections which Serols reversed (but in the current version, these sections are now gone or have been split into others)
- Obamapinoy1982 JUNE 2013
- not a super important edit to note, but amusingly added the MOST oddly specific info I've ever read by including information about a helicopter crash with the time it was reported down to the second
- Pyrrhus16 MAY 2011
- removed an entire list section titled "Notable Movies and Shorts Containing Great and Comical Car Chases" (a section many had repeatedly contributed to up until this point)
- Astonmartini JULY 2010
- added and deleted hyperlinks for practicality throughout the article
This user is a student editor in Texas_AM_University/Technical_Editing_(Spring_2023). |