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Good Articles vs. Needs Improvement

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Kingdom of Norway (872-1397)

  • has a banner listing things that need to be looked at
  • additional citations
  • original research
  • in-text citations are missing
  • recent revisions focused on making the content more accurate and adding citations
  • compared to good articles, this one is not organized very well and the headings could be better
  • it has a story-telling tone to some of the information
  • some of the sections need more information
  • many of the sections are just bulleted lists instead of informative content

Severe Weather

  • On the talk page, people discussed issues with the structure of the article, the focus of the article, adding references, topics that should be removed, and a lot of discussion on the thunderstorm section
  • The most recent revisions were based on tagging sources
  • I think there has been some good progress made, but I think the organization of the content could still be improved
  • Some of the information is contradictory to the definition provided for what qualifies severe weather
  • The explanation for what causes severe weather does not consider weather not associated with thunderstorms

Andikaylynn (talk) 19:19, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

Article Revision Proposals

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Martha Graham

Kingdom of Norway (872-1397)

Bob Fosse

Andikaylynn (talk) 06:34, 22 February 2018 (UTC)