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Wikipedia's Furla article for ENGL1101.58

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• Amed, Imran. (2009). "CEO Talk | Paolo Fontanelli, Chief Executive Officer, Furla"
• Zargani, Luisa. (2014). "Furla Seeking To Update Image"
• "FURLA: THE COURAGE TO DEVELOP A WORLDWIDE BRAND"
• (2010). "Furla – the Italian Brand of Handbags"

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Original

Furla is an Italian company that was created by the Furlanetto family over 80 years ago in 1927. The company is currently a limited liability company, still owned by the Furlanetto family. Furla features Italian-designed products that range from handbags and shoes to accessories. Its headquarters are located in Bologna, in a historic 18th century villa; Furla has 5 subsidiaries in USA, France, Japan, Hong Kong, and Korea.

Revised

Furla is an Italian company that was created in 1927 by the Furlanetto family. The company is still owned by the Furlanetto family today and is currently a limited liability company. The company is known for its Italian touch on handbags, shoes, and accessories. The company has over 1,000 stores that range from selling within departments stores, corner shops, outlet stores, etc. Its headquarters is located in Bologna, Italy at a historic 18th century villa

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