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Epidemiology[edit]
[edit]The prevalence any age-related macular degeneration is higher in Europeans than in Asians and Africans.[citation needed] There is no difference in prevalence between Asians and Africans[1]. The incidence of age-related macular degeneration and its associated features increases with age and is low in people <55 years of age[2] with smoking being the strongest modifiable risk factor[3]. Age-related macular degeneration accounts for more than 54% of all vision loss in the white population in the USA. An estimated 8 million Americans are affected with early age-related macular degeneration, of whom over 1 million will develop advanced age-related macular degeneration within the next 5 years. In the UK, age-related macular degeneration is the cause of blindness in almost 42% of those who go blind aged 65–74 years, almost two-thirds of those aged 75–84 years, and almost three-quarters of those aged 85 years or older.[citation needed] Macular degeneration is more likely to be found in Caucasians than in people of African descent.
- ^ Wong, Wan Ling; Su, Xinyi; Li, Xiang; Cheung, Chui Ming G.; Klein, Ronald; Cheng, Ching-Yu; Wong, Tien Yin (2014-2). "Global prevalence of age-related macular degeneration and disease burden projection for 2020 and 2040: a systematic review and meta-analysis". The Lancet. Global Health. 2 (2): e106–116. doi:10.1016/S2214-109X(13)70145-1. ISSN 2214-109X. PMID 25104651.
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- ^ Velilla, Sara; García-Medina, José Javier; García-Layana, Alfredo; Dolz-Marco, Rosa; Pons-Vázquez, Sheila; Pinazo-Durán, M. Dolores; Gómez-Ulla, Francisco; Arévalo, J. Fernando; Díaz-Llopis, Manuel (2013). "Smoking and Age-Related Macular Degeneration: Review and Update". Journal of Ophthalmology. 2013. doi:10.1155/2013/895147. ISSN 2090-004X. PMC 3866712. PMID 24368940.
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Comments
[edit]Thank you for sharing these suggestions. I have a few notes:
- Citation needed tag added. You can reuse the citation, but it is best to have a citation after every sentence in WP articles
- add your references after the punctuation like this,2 this.1
- Is UK defined earlier? If not define and add wikilink
- wikilink on blindness if not linked earlier in article
- second citation needed tag added to last sentence
Great works o far! It is nice to see all these improvements with high quality sources. JenOttawa (talk) 17:18, 6 November 2018 (UTC)