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Bio

I have a keen interest in the medical field, particularly in pharmacy. I am passionate about directly caring for patients and making a tangible difference in their lives. Additionally, I have a love for art, especially watercolor, as it allows me to express my creativity and embrace various outcomes in the process. Nature also captivates me; I find immense beauty in the moon, mountains, trees, sunsets, and sunrises. These breathtaking scenes never fail to amaze and inspire me.

The expanding global pharmaceutical market was valued at approximately $1.48 trillion in 2022 and is anticipate to reach $1.9 trillion by 2027.

My Wikipedia activities

Over the years, I have used Wikipedia for my history classes when tasked with researching historians. Although I rarely used it before entering ENG 101, I find it interesting how many people rely on the site, despite hearing that its information is not always reliable. I hope the site improves, and I aspire to be part of that change by contributing accurate information to make it more useful to the public.

Article evaluation

I have been fascinated by the artificial intelligence behind self-driving vehicles produced by Tesla. I want Wikipedia to include descriptive information about the new technology developed by the company to design such intelligent systems. I visited the Tesla, Inc. article on Wikipedia and found three aspects worth commenting on: lack of new information, good overall insight, and important missing information.

Issues regarding vehicles

I've noticed that the website provides information about the beginnings of Tesla, focusing on topics such as the founding of the company, the creator Elon Musk, and descriptions of various vehicle models. However, it often lacks details on how Tesla vehicles are powered and their environmental impacts, which sometimes makes the information presented biased. Once I realized the website's primary focus, I decided to include the effects of Tesla vehicles and how they are impacting our environment.

Citation

The website does a great job citing information and indicating sources, ensuring the information's reliability. The section titled "Roadster (2005–2009)" is particularly well done, as it includes external links for readers to learn about the company's background, involved personnel, departments, and programs. Overall, the citations are excellent.

Lack of new information

Tesla is well-known for its high technology, and adding information about recent developments and innovations to its Wikipedia page would make the article more current. Details about improvements in Autopilot and Full Self-Driving capabilities, as well as updates on advancements in Tesla's battery technology, would be valuable additions.

Conclusion

I would rate this article as "okay." It provides extensive information about Tesla's history and background, which helps readers understand how the company established itself. However, to keep up with new developments, the Wikipedia article should evolve. By incorporating information about Tesla's environmental issues and including citations, the article could greatly improve in providing readers with a comprehensive grasp of the company's current challenges and initiatives.