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My notes for Biographies.

MOS:LEAD

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[[MOS:LEAD#Elements_of_the_lead]]

Correct Structure of Lead Section:

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== First section ==

  • "Hatnotes are placed at the very top ... before ... images, navigational ... and maintenance templates" [[WP:HNP]]

Infobox

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  • Gregorian calendar adopted in 1752 in most English-speaking countries
    • birth_date={{birth date|1913|1|9|mf=y}}
    • death_date={{death date and age|1994|4|22|1913|1|9}}

Opening paragraph

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Name, dates, citizenship, what, why

  1. "Name(s) and title(s)" [[WP:OPENPARA]]
    1. "still living", eg: "Serena Williams (born September 26, 1981) ..."[[WP:OPENPARA]]
    2. "only the years are known", eg: "Socrates (470–399 BC) was..."[[WP:OPENPARA]]
    3. "year of birth is completely unknown ... earliest known period of activity", eg: "Offa of Mercia (before 734 – 26 July 796) ..."[[WP:OPENPARA]]
    4. "year of birth is known only approximately", eg: "Genghis Khan (c. 1162 – August 18, 1227) ..."[[WP:OPENPARA]]
    5. "years of both birth and death are known only approximately, eg: "Dionysius Exiguus (c. 470 – c. 540) ..."[[WP:OPENPARA]]
    6. "year of death is completely unknown ... extrapolated from last known period of activity", eg: "Robert Menli Lyon (1789 – after 1863) ..."[[WP:OPENPARA]]
    7. "reign of a sovereign is uncertain", eg: "Rameses III (reigned c. 1180 BCE – c. 1150 BCE) ..."[[WP:OPENPARA]]
    8. "known to have been ... flourishing", eg: "Osmund ([[floruit|fl.]] 760–772) ..."[[WP:OPENPARA]]
    9. "known to have been alive as early as about 660 ... died in 685", eg: "Aethelwalh ([[floruit|fl.]] c. 660–685) ..."[[WP:OPENPARA]]
  2. "Dates of birth and death" [[WP:OPENPARA]] [[MOS:DOB]]
  3. Citizenship
    1. "country of ... citizen(ship) ... when the person became notable" [[WP:OPENPARA]]
    2. "Ethnicity or sexuality should not ... be emphasized ... unless ... relevant to ... notability" [[WP:OPENPARA]]
  4. "notable positions ... activities ... roles" [[WP:OPENPARA]]
  5. "Why the person is notable" [[WP:OPENPARA]]

Names

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  • "article title should generally be the name by which the subject is most commonly known" [[MOS:BIO#Names]]
  • "subject's full name should be given in the lead paragraph" [[MOS:BIO#Names]]
  • "Listen" link to follow name: "François Maurice Adrien Marie Mitterrand ([fʁɑ̃swa mɔʁis mitɛˈʁɑ̃] (listen), 26 October 1916 – 8 January 1996)" [[WP:OPENPARA]]
  • "most common use of boldface is to highlight the first occurrence of the title ... and ... synonyms, in the lead section" [[MOS:BOLD]]
  • Examples:
    • (from Fidel Castro): Fidel Alejandro Castro Ruz (born August 13, 1926) …
    • (from François Mitterrand): François Maurice Adrien Marie Mitterrand (October 26, 1916 – January 8, 1996) …
    • (from Brian Jones): Lewis Brian Hopkin Jones (28 February 1942 – 3 July 1969) …
    • (from Bill Clinton): William Jefferson Clinton (born William Jefferson Blythe III on August 19, 1946) …
  • Maiden names: "give the maiden ... of a woman better known under her married name" [[MOS:BIO#Names]]
    • Lucy Washington (née Payne) (1772?–1846) ...
    • Lucy (Payne) Washington ...
  • Jr., Sr.: "Do not place a comma before Jr., Sr., or Roman numeral ... Sammy Davis Jr." [[MOS:BIO#Names]]
  • Pseudonyms: "legal name should usually appear first ... followed closely by the pseudonym" [[MOS:BIO#Names]]
    • Louis Bert Lindley Jr. (June 29, 1919 – December 8, 1983), better known by the stage name Slim Pickens ...[[MOS:BIO#Names]]
  • Doctor or Professor? "Academic and professional titles ... should not be used before the name"[[WP:CREDENTIAL]]
  • PHD or MBA? "Post-nominal letters ... academic ... should not be included following the subject's name" [[WP:CREDENTIAL]]
  • VC or CBE? "Post-nominal letters ... should be included when they are issued by a country". Use pipes, eg: Joe Bloggs, [[Victoria Cross|VC]] [[WP:INITIAL]]
  • Sir or Dame? "Titles of Knighthood such as Sir and Dame usually need not be included in the article title... e.g., Arthur Conan Doyle" [[WP:NCBRITPEER]]
  • Subsequent uses of names: "After the initial mention of any name, the person should be referred to by ..." [[WP:SURNAME]]
    • Royalty? "Robert Dudley, 1st Earl of Leicester" to be "Dudley" before elevation but "the Earl of Leicester" after
    • Common pseudonym w/o surname? Pseudonym, eg: "Snoop Dog"
    • Common pseudonym w/ surname? Pseudonymous surname, eg: "Hulk Hogan" to be "Hogan"
    • "one-word names, nicknames or pseudonyms, but who often also use their legal names professionally", eg: "J-Lo" to be "Lopez"
    • "academic or professional titles, subsequent uses of names should omit them", eg: "Dr. Ruth" to be "Westheimer" not "Dr. Ruth"
  • Family members with the same surname: "use given names or complete names to refer to relatives upon first mention"
    • eg: "The Reagans arrived separately, Ronald by helicopter and Nancy by car."
    • eg: "Jacob Grimm was thirteen months older than his brother, Wilhelm."
  • Tense: Present for living, past for dead, past for events
  • Out-of-date material: Avoid "currently" use "as of 2010" [[WP:DATED]]

Layout WP:LAY

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  • Lead: dablinks, maintenance tags, infoboxes, images, nav templates, introductory text ("broad summary of the topic"), TOC, first section header
  • Section templates:
    • {{Main}} - this generates Main article; link.
    • {{Details}} – this generates For more details on this topic, see
    • {{Further}} – this generates Further information:
    • {{Related}} – this generates Related terms:
    • {{also}} – this generates See also
  • Paragraphs:
    • "single-sentence paragraphs should be minimized ... paragraphs that exceed a certain length become hard to read" [[Wikipedia:Layout#Paragraphs]]
    • "Short paragraphs and single sentences generally do not warrant their own subheading" [[Wikipedia:Layout#Paragraphs]]
  • Order of appendices: [[WP:FOOTERS]]
    • Works or Publications
    • See also
    • Notes and/or References
    • Further reading
    • External links
  • Order of footers:[[WP:FOOTERS]]
  • "Works"/"Discography"/"Filmography": "bulleted list, usually ordered chronologically" [[Wikipedia:Layout#Works_or_Publications]]
  • "See also" section: bulleted list, preferably alphabetized, of internal links [[WP:ALSO]]
  • Further reading: "bulleted list ... alphabetized ... reasonable number of recommended publications that do not appear ... and were not used to verify article content" [[WP:FURTHER]]
  • External links: "bulleted list of recommended relevant websites, ... short description ... should not appear in the article's body text, nor should they appear ... if they already appear in the References or Notes" [[Wikipedia:Layout#External_links]]

Random notes

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  • Birthplace invalid in the name, eg: "Serena Williams (born September 26, 1981) ..." [[MOS:BIO#Opening_paragraph]]
  • "significant alternative names for the topic should be mentioned in...in the first sentence" [[WP:AT]]
  • WP:UEIA language translations in brackets not the alternate name itself
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