User talk:Aishwarya889

Welcome!

Hello, Aishwarya889, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:22, 24 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Aishwarya889

hope you have great success editing your articles and receiving positive feedback

Larry (Lunchmeat30 (talk) 04:33, 5 September 2016 (UTC)).[reply]

Hi!!

Hi Aishwarya, Hope you are doing great with your editing work. All the best for this semester ahead. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Naga Sravani Dasari (talk • contribs) 16:12, 10 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello

Hi Aishwarya, this is Haifa your class mate. I enjoyed what you wrote about yourself. I am also like you new to Wikipedia editing but hoping that all of us will improve our skills on editing.

see you next class.Haifaalburek (talk) 20:23, 11 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome

Hello Aishwarya this is Sai Varma Sarikonda. I am your classmate and we have been together for 2semesters and good to see you back again this semester. I hope you enjoy this course with editing wiki's and articles. Sai varma sarikonda (talk) 21:25, 11 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback

Nice work on your article draft. I noticed that you are listing your references at the end, rather than including them in the text. Although I realise that you're still in the drafting process, I think it's helpful to add inline references as you write. That way they're there when you're done, and you're never left wondering where you got any given piece of information from. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 12:27, 5 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I took another look at your draft. A few issues you still need to iron out

You need to do a careful copy edit. There are spaces before commas and periods that shouldn't be there. Make sure that references are after punctuation, not before.
You need to create a lead section for the article. Take look at the Editing Wikipedia handout (you should have gotten a hard copy from your instructor, but I'm including a link to it here).
You need to make sure that everything is properly supported by a reference. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:37, 14 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]