User talk:Aobessette
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[edit]Hello, Aobessette, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:44, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
Kate Im's Peer Review
[edit]Hi there,
I really love the images and graphs you provided on your Wikipedia page! It makes the information easier to understand and digest since electoral numbers are usually cut and dry. Your article is also unbiased and neutral.
I think to improve your page, you might want to consider bringing in information from prior to the 2020 election and bringing in historical context or information to help the reader contextualize the importance of the election. By reading your article alone, I am not sure if incumbent president Faure Gnassingbé of the Union for the Republic won by a truly fair election. Were there any issues of corruption? You mentioned there were electoral reforms in early 2020, I think it would be good if you elaborated on that issue. And I'm also interested why there were so many blank and invalid votes this election because 963,413 is a large number of voters.
For https://www.panapress.com/Togolese-to-vote-in-presidential-a_630617927-lang2.html, I was not able to access the information on the link. Your other links work and support your data.
I hope that helps!
Kateim (talk) 20:58, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
Daniel Na's Peer Review
[edit]Hey, your article is looking good. It's objective and straight to the point. In your Campaign section, that last sentence about the Togolese government throttling internet services -- it feels a bit out of place. The first two sentences are about specific political parties' nominees but that last one is about the state's democracy as a whole being in danger. Other than that, I don't really have anything else to say, your article is pretty solid. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Danielna418 (talk • contribs) 21:52, 5 April 2020 (UTC)