User talk:Ashley Suk

Hi Ashley, here's my feedback on your choices:

Catastrophic schizophrenia <-- definitely needs some work. Could be a good one.

Waxy flexibility <-- could be good, although it's almost too obscure/specific. I wonder how much research you'd be able to find on it.

Thought broadcasting <-- see comment above

Cognitive slippage <-- see comment for waxy flexibility.

Racing thoughts <-- needs to be expanded, and should be not as obscure as the previous three, so probably a better choice.

ScottPKingPhD (talk) 17:49, 7 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Lova Falk talk 07:18, 15 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Editing Dance Therapy Page

Thanks for your help but here is some feedback: 1. as for neutrality is was really one sided when I started and really all opinion and no facts. 2. the list was a list in the reference 3. the neg. section says that no neg. have been reported(in my opinion probably b/c it is tapered for each individual even in group settings) 4.thanks for fixing the references i han't a clue where they were to go 5."first wave"/waves sections i have nothing to do with 6. allied professions is what the article used

Hope you done think I'm being offensive....and no you don't come off as harsh. 3faith.hope.love (talk) 04:13, 18 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

Hey Ashley, Im assuming that this artical was basically bare when you started. You have done a good job so far bringing it up to speed so to say. One thing I wanted to say was a couple of your sources are confusing. I dont know if you didnt have enough info for them or what the story is, but they dont look like the Wiki cite style. If that makes any sense. Other then that good work.GLKeepr1 (talk) 02:10, 21 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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